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About Me Member General Poet AugmentedImplement18/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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Sun Nov 2, 2008, 1:19 PM
Clear my throat and start my speech.
reading writings I have written.
i ask of you to examine me.
to criticize me until I'm sore.
i ask of you just what you think,
question my open opinion.
undo each line laced with my ink.
examine what I write for.

Missed explanations leave me dry, so three more I'll write tonight.
erasing all I said before, and replacing it with what is right.

People please lend me your voice.
let me find a way to hear.
ease into the channeled noise.
and move me where you steer.
speak to me, tell me how to improve these old ideas I write.
explain the things I can not see, please lend me your insight.
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  • Listening to: Oltremare by Ludovico Einaudi

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  • Current Residence: Fedderal Way
  • Interests: Music and junk
  • Favourite band or musician: Currently Bloodsimple
  • Favourite genre of music: heavy metal/modern piano
  • Favourite poet or writer: Charles Dodgson
  • Favourite style of art: Abstract
  • Favourite game: Killzone
  • Favourite gaming platform: 360
  • Favourite cartoon character: Master Shake
  • Tools of the Trade: Microsoft Word

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:iconwolfehpants:
ljkhdfg

BACON.


HAI.

LOL
It's Andy.
:iconaugmentedimplement:
Hey whats up didn't know you had a deviant

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-A.I.
:iconmorphiul:
I gotta say, you've got probably some of the best writing on your profile that I've read in a while. Keep up the great work!

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I'd never call myself a hero, that's your job!
:iconiraph:
Yo! This is Sabre's, or Kit's, friend Raph; nice to meet ya. Came to check out your stuff, and I'm liking what I see.
:iconfastbow:
Thanks for the watch!

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-J
Read and comment. Growth as a writer can only occur with criticism, so read and comment on my work.
:iconsabre230:
Thanks for the watch, bro! I'll be seeing new stuff real soon, correct?

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:iconaugmentedimplement:
yep I'm going to be posting ten new poems every week. i might lower it to five, but yeah there will definitely be new stuff.

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-A.I.
:iconsabre230:
Hell yes. Lol

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